All Comments on 'Until our bodies have met'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
A few brief suggestions.

Your heart is in the right place but your language like your legs are all tangled up.

Each moment with you is so good,

I hope I'm able to show wood

I hope we never have to part

I hope you didn't smell my f....t

You touch my hip and grab my dick

I stroke your long pubic hair,

From top to bottom there,

Our bodies are bare

Then there is a rip

My penis gets caught in my zip

Neither one of us cared to use protection

Perhaps we are afraid of rejection

Once our movements are in sink

I'm in heaven now, but my arm pits stink

Just kidding around, keep at it.

Vampires need fresh blood.

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