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All Comments on 'Wrapture'

by Clive Cromwell II

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Sexy Story

That is one fine sexy story.

kbatekbateabout 19 years ago
abrupt finish

Good story, but I thought the ending was a touch abrupt. Well written.

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinabout 19 years ago
A well constructed story.

A nice story of two very busy people in love. As kbate mentioned, the ending could have been stronger, but endings give most writers fits. Keep up the good work.

Rumple

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