All Comments on 'Grocery Shopping'

Nice naughty little fantasy. I definitely could imagine a longer LW or Romance from this, but still a satisfyingly complete quick sketch. Thanks *****

and then he woke up from his nap, TK U MLJ LV NV

Loved it!

I loved your story. Fun sexy fantasy. Thanks

No harm fantasizing. I thought it was going to be Earp gangbang when I read Wyatt and Morgan.

I shop at Frys (Krogers in Arizona) and it is a great place to pick-up men...including hot firemen.

This was an enjoyable read despite the vile behavior.

The ending seemed a bit cut off but didn't detract much.

There isn't a single grocery store with enough employees to be helpful in the States.

Nice story. I'm 60 and my Wife is 62 and she still cuckolds me after 39 years of marriage.

My very busty English wife,Sheridan Neville,loves being fucked by old men while I watch.She is 31 yrs old and prefers men in their 60's to enjoy her curvy body.

Someone once mentioned long grey hair on an older woman hints at twelve cats at home and a history of mental illness

I fell asleep after the third paragraph....what happened?

But I had to laugh at the commentator whose wife had supposedly been cuckolding him for 30 plus years. Really? Can you walk? I mean without a spine it must be pretty difficult.

1 star

Good catch! That was exactly my inspiration in making up the names!

Anony wrote, "There isn't a single grocery store with enough employees to be helpful in the States."

Nope, at least at the Kroger supermarket on Bypass Road in Richmond, it's exactly as I said it was. I know, I know, it's hard to believe, but it's true nevertheless.

You always go for cute, huh? Some old dude picks up some old woman who wears her gray hair down, ridiculous looking, by the way, at a grocery store, takes him to her house. She must be insane. Who would do that? I would stab you in the throat with a carrot peeler from the kitchen utensil aisle if you hit on me at a grocery store. That's how we handle creepy stalkers at the grocery store around here. Of course, being Mr. Fantastic and all stretchy, you would live. You should take a writing break and soak up a few cosmic rays, get that big brain working again. Maybe brainstorm with The Thing.

I think most men at one time or another has spotted a woman they would want to approach in public and they run all sorts of fantasies through their head. If only things could be these easy. Thanks for the nice quick story.

If some guy roughly your aged flirted with you, you’d just up and stab him with the nearest utensil? No, “No thanks, not interested,” or not even, “Go away, creep,” but straight for stabbing weaponry?

Been there many times. Lived in Madison County 30 years. Worked 5 years about 500 yards above that Kroger. BEST thing I can say about it,, if the world has an ASS, Madison County Ky. is the hole. Decent reading though. Give it a 3.

Do you take Viagra so you can jack off? Of course any man bold and arrogant enough to pickup and fuck a house wife is going to just forget about her, 'cause he's obviously so nice and considerate.

Was there a point to this story, besides showing your ass?

Well, only if there were no pickaxe handle convenient. Blunt instruments are my weapons of choice, but the pickaxe handle is rarely found in grocery stores and are too large to be carried conveniently in one's purse. One must improvise, adapt. A nice salad tong might be an acceptable substitute.

It's an unusual thing to find a lady among us Elderlies who wears her gray hair down, in my experience. (I'm happy to display my gray locks, but trimmed rather than in wild abundance.)

So Kimi, you have to accept that RR has encountered an unusual lady at his local supermarket. (Although it would appear that he was lucky to have found one not equipped with your preferred array of weaponry and your willingness to deploy it).

Lue

That Kimi will be in a playful mood. Better than the stories, most of the time. I just come for the comments.

It's a fantasy, and a good one for the author...So why end it with: " Lose my address, forget my name, and never come back. We can never see each other again."? Why not: "untill next time we meet in Kroger's "? This point make it seem it isn't a fantasy...3*

The never meet again ending was supposed to say that Morgan needed that quick tryst, but that she loved her husband and was feeling guilty. She was not interested in a love affair.

Does she get picked up by other guys? I don’t know, never put that much consideration into it. As I said, it was just a quick fantasy, not a story line to develop.

Like I said, I did have that quick flirt with a lady my age, but while that lady did have the bid wedding set and appreciated being flirted with, the rest of the description wasn’t her.

Yes, I’m old enough to appreciate grey hair on women, and think it makes them look sexier than the obviously fake coloring so many older women use. I did have a specific woman in mind with the longer hair, but changed the clothing description from aging hippie to older housewife.

I also wanted to introduce some realism about sex with older women, such as difficulty getting wet. The mastectomy idea sprang into my mind halfway through the story, as something too many women have to deal with, and are so uncomfortable with.

If I ever see Kimi in public, i'll be sure not to do something innocent like telling them that they look nice today and act a little flirty.

Flirting is fun, try it sometime instead of going overboard with weapon threats.

I liked it!

I smiled at a woman in Kroger's and she stabbed me in the neck with a potato peeler!!!

Kimi strikes again!!!😁

Good thing you were at Kroger, and not the Tractor Supply, which is right next door. They have Kimi’s stated favorite, pickaxe handles . . . with the pickaxe heads attached!

Don't think I would have recovered from the hardware flirting.

Quite a few of her that area. All holier than thou, and will screw you blind if given the chance. Also, you forgot the medical clinic between Kroger and Tractor Supply. Short trip for when she gets through with the tater peeler.....ROBT

Kroger sounds like the place to be.

So many married woman are fucking coworkers and other guys from there area. Nothing worse than a husband who is a local laughing stock.

And those married women fucking their coworkers are fucking married men, but somehow the married men fucking around never get quite as much condemnation as the married women.

Went back to Kroger yesterday, didn’t flirt with anyone.

Maybe not in your circle of friends.

However, point must be made, excluding rape, every act of penetrative sex occurs because of a woman's decision to allow it. The woman, in all instances does the inviting. The sexual act is result of her choice.

True you and I live in unviverses where the females are quite dissimilar. The older women I have known, after achieving their first orally induced orgasm, readily experience a second, a third....perhaps it is your technique.

Luedon is noticeably silent. She insists a woman requires an emotional connection to acheive that state. In your story, an older woman us so driven by lust she invites a complete stranger into her house to have sex which ends less than an hour before husband gets home.

Grocery stores in your area obviously do things different than in mine. In my area all stocking has been completed by early morning so as to not create situation you described except for those few souls stocking up at 6am

An "emotional state" is what I said. I did not say "emotional connection". Clearly there was no "emotional connection" in this story of RR's.

Lue

The emotional state of wife. Read to me like she had clean up after committing adultery part down pat. Though timeline would be close. Strip bed, load washer, make bed, shower, put sheets in dryer...at best sheets would still be drying.

I realize all husbands are clueless, but I certainly knew what loads had been laundered in my house. Could be though that I was responsible for the folding and putting away the dried laundry.

When writing first-person from the viewpoint of the flirter, to include in the story a description of the emotional state of the flirtee.

Lue

Grocery stores are a great hunting grounds. a big 5

Oh, and he's a wife stealing asshole also. Pure shit.

because they remind him of his dead ex wife the whore who fucked over a 100 men and told him on her death bed.

For fucks sake Bonnie, try coming up with a more original comment. This one is getting old and tiring. By the way, nobody really cares what a bitch, who's been banned from a porn site, has to say. Give it a fucking rest and go fuck your neighbor.

Isn't that what a slut like you does?

I attended EKU and actually use to work in the Kroger you mentioned. My apartment was just past the Planitarium. I know it was a fantasy but I had plenty of Literotica worthy experiences while living there.

Thanks for the memories!

Somehow I missed this story from one of my favorite authors. Lue seemed to enjoy it, Kimmi not so much. Well written, but I don't like cheating at any age.

Cheating sluts of ALL ages!!!

I’ll admit to not getting past their parking lot meeting when she wanted to be ravished after admitting she was married. I don’t like reading about cheating sluts.

Bill S.