All Comments on 'Domina Shelle's New Hypno Boy Ch. 02'

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Anonymousalmost 6 years ago

This series is fine, and I'm mostly just glad you're writing again regularly...

...but FWIW, in my opinion, pretty much all of your other in-progress series are more interesting, tense, and inventive (and hence ultimately hotter)

Just my two cents.

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I appreciate everyone's feedback from the stories and hope you enjoy them. It is hard for me to write patiently at times and I know sometimes there are errors in grammar or spelling as I tend to rush through some parts. The moments I get caught up in the most tend to come ou...

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