by SciFurz
Funny, cute and of course, awkward towards the end. Funny side: Guy and the girls see an old man feeding the birds with bread and doing the same to Avia. How original. Cute side: Cani saving a boy's drawing on the tallest building despite her fears of heights. Awkward side: Guy and Minou. I feel bad for Guy, especially when his girlfriends are getting jealous of him around other women (mainly Minou).
What happened to the girl that was going to be stargazing at their home? She was supposed to come back the next night then never made an appearance.
This story is one that keeps a smile on my face the whole time I read it. Glad to see your back and posting again. Keep up the great work.
To short, and ending with a cliffhanger!
But I still love it!
So I could give only 5 š
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well I see you found the solution to the porcupine hugging suggestion I made awhile back.
I loved it. I can't enough of these stories. I get so happy reading them that I smile like an idiot. I hope Minou starts playing a bigger role. That would be interesting to see
Good to hear that. :-)
Minou will be back in once in a while in future episodes. I made her character with recurrence in mind.
Yep, got the idea while I was drawing and sharpening my pencil. ;-)
I so do love the story, I waited for ever for this story please please keep writing and I hope you make the chapters longer if you write once in awhile like mim,s and the other girls family I'm hoping you add min or another girl to the story