All Comments on 'Replaced Ch. 03'

by chas19839

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Interesting .. enjoyable

Different twist on an old theme .. nicely written .. very much looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Revenge

You should turn it into a revenge story for the cuckold hubby! Make it so that he can’t take it any further and gets revenge. Nobody in their right mind would allow someone to not be the father of their own kids!

ToddHoffmanToddHoffmanalmost 6 years ago
Great Chapter!

Sent to bed early by the Bull! Very hot, loved it!

The_Paperback_WriterThe_Paperback_Writeralmost 6 years ago
Has potential for a great story

I like the idea for this story. The humiliation you’re putting the husband through is unique. I would like to see more details in each chapter. I feel it ends too quickly or there’s not enough story. I also would’ve appreciated your story more if we saw how this relationship formed. It would help paint a picture of how different the family’s life was before Vince showed up.

Overall, your story is good. The scenarios you have the cuckold is interesting and makes your story entertaining. Don’t be afraid to add a little more details in your chapter. It will go a long way. Looking forward to future chapters!

ppoiuytre55ppoiuytre55almost 6 years ago
Writing

Loved the part where he said “Ma...Miss Maddie”. Great details. Longer stories, please!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Go on please

Go on please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Perfekt life for a sissy cuck

This is really the perfect life for a sissy cuck. Humiliation and hard household work will soon break her in. More of this kind, please. Krista Bograeus

johsunjohsunabout 4 years ago

Don't like that underage kids are involved in this story. Not sure if that's appropriate. Yes, no sex is explicitly written that they're in, but in the context of the story they have to know what's going on. NOT GOOD,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I really don't like the kids getting involved with his humiliation as the maid. I am not surprised that the story has the kids really liking Vince but then it is a cuckold fantasy. The kids are going to grow up and one day find out that the maid is their father but again I am wondering why they are not questioning why their daddy is now the maid and this "uncle Vince" is playing with mommy.

aurelietraveaurelietraveover 2 years ago

like it so much, really good one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I see that there is another chapter to this crap but there is nothing that can allow me to continue reading this crap. To those who find this exciting, my sympathy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very good story. The humiliation of the cuckold is perfekt. The control of her is perfekt and so are The punishments. But The maid should be locked up in a chastity device and denied all forms of sex. Total submission, humiliation and Hard work is her future. Kristel

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The problem with this story is, I would believe that in any family, whether it a strange cuckold type of thing, incest would be more believable than this stupid crap. It’s kind of like science fiction.

4yourpleasureiam4yourpleasureiam7 days ago

Oh, yes sir and little miss, I am bad and deserve , no beg you to punish me. I like this story

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