All Comments on 'Deeper Tastes Ch. 01'

Lmao yeah right. Also the wording was a bit weird at some parts like, " the place was a small Italian, painted black outside." Or "pulled out a small, purple, rubber, oblong from her bag." A what?

Take this as constructive criticism and keep trying.

And also enjoyed your previous story, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter in this story. Thanks for sharing it with us!