All Comments on 'Church Friends Ch. 03'

Peter,

Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter. I was so disapointed that it ended. All I can say is WOW.

Waiting, RPbush

Alone they are too short to receive higher scores...Just some advice. I like them good job so far..

Charie being on the Pill sorta dampens the eroticism in this fantasy story. I hope that you will take her off it before the story concludes.

could not disagree more with don87654. the Pill allows the freedom to explore with out drastic consequences.

over the last 60+ yrs it has trans formed our society for the better.

Another well thought out and written chapter, kind of short but full of promise. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.