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Bad Ending
He would have just divorced the bitch after all she set out to con money out of his family for a "bastard child".
Great
I'm a sucker for a happy ending. One of your better stories Bob. You've got a winner here.
I do beleve however that Camryn in the story did deeds in the home that were a little crazy. After she started fucking other men in her home, did she really believe they wouldn't show up for more sex with her for a long time after that?
That would really cause problems in a later time frame. Every time Camryn got a phone call or a knock on the door, and a strange man's voice, Dave would have been incensed and had to be raised to anger in either fighting for his wife's honor, (of which there was none) or just ignoring it, and having her tell the guy she was no longer interested. A couple a week for a year would be 72 different lovers in that year. Unless some were 2nd timers, thats a lot of guys.lol
Interesting scenario?
Maybe
Good write but I don't see many guys going back with this slut. If I were the husband, I might take her back ater she got knocked up. After she started fucking guys after the baby was born...no fuckin way. I would ask my father if he was a cuckold ass wipe and send him outta my life also. I woder how mother would react if she knew......
What would have been funny...
...would have been after the father finished his advice (especially about the son), the mother could have come in and said "He's right dear. After all, none of you three boys are his either." And when the father grabs for his heart she could have added. "Oh, dear, did I never tell you that?"
Scathing report #1
Good Evening Mr and Mrs. America and all the ships at sea! This is a Scathing Report. I read this at one sitting because I could have never managed another. This authors works are truly well written to be sure. However, for one who claims to come from Colorado this author has little understanding of the male psyche. It makes me wonder if the name shouldn't be Just Plain Boob. Nearly without exception, his male characters are at best weak, at worst, stupid, sniveling, and weak. We are asked in this latest effort, to believe that a man and I do use the term loosly here is to accept his wifes mutiple infidelities, her pregancy, his own parents wretched manipulations of their childrens lives, back to the wifes multiple post-pregnancy one night stands another little bastard bun in the oven to continue the "Family Name?" and then to top things off Gramps and Granny, the instigators of this whole danm thing, just accept as a bastard child, with noactual bloodline affiliatiion to them remember that "continuation of the family name" thing? well that stops with the sons, name continues bloodline dies. As icing on this piece of shit cake, when the husband withdraws which is the only option this author allows for him rather than the serveral others which present themselves thereby once again as is so often with this author, painting the aggrieved party as the bad guy! all Kindly Gramps has to do is give him the old "father/son" talk and everything is all better.."I'm going to do my own work His house,his wife?" Yeee gawds!
The only thing more preposterous and unexplainable that this writers storylines is why you people, other than his masterful technical competency, continue to read this garbage and call it entertainment!
Good Night, and good riddance to this story!!
Confused about a wife's "rights"
I'm confused about what appears to be the underlying message -- a wife's right for sex, regardless of the source. So the husband won't touch her -- and since she has the complete right to maintain getting laid, she can choose whomever she wants?
Since when did having sex (either in a marraige or single) become a "right"? If a spouse decides that not having sex is the basis of their ongoing relationship, then it appears from this story that it is okay for the wife to make a decision that sex can be obtained from any she chooses. After all, it is just sex, right?
This story is disturbing on many levels, because it seems to gloss over the real problems that occur in this relationship while ending with a completely fantasy-based "happy ending".
Could've been better, more erotic
An excellent story. It was only missing one thing.....A little "michismo" on your part that could have been eliminated except that you obviously subscribe to that same bullshit that a lot of our society subscribes to, and that is that when you first put a wedding ring on your bride you seem to think that she gains some sort of slave ring through her nose. Nothing is further from the truth--God did not make us "good" by his own definition by causing us to only enjoy one cock or one cunt as the case may be. And we can get pregnant or impregnate anyone regardless of our marital status, for about 40 years for women and 90 years for men, which when examined seriously would not allow for much exclusivity except by conscious thought or some sort of religious dogma preventing it.
well written bullcrap
I know that it's a bit of a dichotomy to say that the story was well written but it sucked. This Camyrn was alledgedly a college graduate. She allegedly was happily married. And yet at the drop of a hat and without a second thought she cuckold her husband, got pregnant by a stranger, had unprotected sex with 18 different guys?
That doesn't sound too smart. In fact, no one is that stupid, least of all an educated person in a committed relationship.
I'm always amazed at these stories where the loving wife professes her undying love of her husband while screwing countless other men.
And after the birth of the child, bringing a hundred strange men into the house for sex is another unusual way to demonstrate her unending love of her husband.
I guess the problem I had is the story was illogical. The 'happy ending' as such was achieved by the husband having a drunken epiphany at the hands of his father? THis isn't fiction, it's fantasy.
I can live with a well written cheating wife story. But when the characters act stupidly and without regard to their own self-interest or the best interests of their family, I have to say: bullcrap.
By the way, pay no attention to the little man jacking off behind the curtain. That's only Don87654 living out his 'pregnancy' fetish through other people, since he himself is shooting blanks. He considers fidelity to be sick and marriage vows to be meaningless. I would point out for Don's sake that fidelity and marriage are not religious inventions, they are the result of the evolution of our species. Other primates such as chimpanzees and bonobos live proliferatly promiscuous existences. That lifestyle works for them. Humans developed pair bonding and a compact between male and female creating a nuclear family for the purposes of raising children and insuring that the male's genes are passed on (along with the female's). This life style has worked for at least 150,000 years. Most people are happy with it. It is because this evolutionary lifestyle is so intertwined with who we are as a species and as people that there are a lot of readers who find 'cheating wife' stories to be repulsive.
That's a theory I'm working on.
YOUR BEST ONE YET BOB
loved it bob think this may be your best one yet. you did a good job on it
thanks
jakewho
I'M NOT BUYING WHAT YOU ARE TRY TO SALE HERE
DAD SAY ANYTHING TO GET MOM OFF HIS BACK.GREED AND BEING A WHORE CAUSE THIS PROBLEM,SEVENTEEN MEN KNOW MARRIAGE SHOULD EXCEPT THAT.BRING MEN TO THE HOUSE AND FUCKING THEM WIMP CITY.YOU WRITE SOME GOOD STUFF, BUT THIS I DON'T BUY.
This was hilarious!
Camryn had unprotected sex with seventeen men to have a baby because she loved her husband? Incredible logic. Earth to the father-in-law in this piece and to the author: the character told us why she did it...to keep the house. She wanted the money in order to stay in the house in the lifestyle she was accustomed to. It had nothing to do with her husband or his family. Of course, I'm to believe that the husband stayed so as not to upset his mother.
I've read cuckold stories before but this charcter is the worst kind of cuckold: a vacuous yuppy with a vacuous wife. Niether party wanted children and their attitude has not changed. But now they are parents. The child seems in the worst predicament, he's stuck with these two. Careful, they might sell him for the right price.
Hey, this woman obviously loves the cash. I hope hubby's life insurance is less than $ 250K, otherwise, he's likely to have an 'accident'.
This was an extremely funny read. It should be in the humor category. As Loving Wife Story it fails badly, but as humor I'd give it a "5".
first mistake
wasin not telling his mother what a slut his wife was... second was in not kicking the shit out of her and getting the divorce he should have got... and why should he pay for a bastard who is not his .. dont you think the other 17 should pay or which ever one has its dna.. we all know she can find out who the father is so he can claim his kid...i myself would not take this crap even if my mom ended up in a psyc ward...it is a subject i have talked about before and 99 percent of men wouldnt so try writing a little more realistically ok vote 1
Wierd
hmmm i dont think she loved hubby..she just loved the house..if the hubby can go without sex y cant the chick after she fucked up and she really loved him..nah not convincing...totally fucked up 1...as far as the greand mom thing is concerned sooner or later the grand mom has to find whose kid wat that...neways seems like she was looking for an oppurtunity or reasont o fuck around nd so did she as soon as she got 1...neways i knowits fiction but the stoyr isnt convincing bor its any erotic that it can leave ne 1 horny...neways u wasted my time...i though u shud read my comments and waste some of urs
this was a tough to rule on.
I always wonder why Dave knowing his parents wanted children didn't get the operation changed. Also to fuck 17 different persons without protection is froth with dangers. Were she sure they were free of any problems or did she said I want a baby in the backseat of a car. I have a problem with him most men should know that when a woman comes off the 5 weeks healing she horny as hell and will fuck a horse. If he didn't know this, what kind ofriends did he have? He being without pussy for over three months, what in the hell doing? It didn't say where he jerk off after seeing how sexy she was trying to get him in her bedroom. A man or womam who have done what she di, but to use their house is a little to far in right field to let happen. What happen later???????????????/
this was a tough to rule on.
I always wonder why Dave knowing his parents wanted children didn't get the operation changed. Also to fuck 17 different persons without protection is froth with dangers. Were she sure they were free of any problems or did she said I want a baby in the backseat of a car. I have a problem with him most men should know that when a woman comes off the 5 weeks healing she horny as hell and will fuck a horse. If he didn't know this, what kind ofriends did he have? He being without pussy for over three months, what in the hell doing? It didn't say where he jerk off after seeing how sexy she was trying to get him in her bedroom. A man or womam who have done what she di, but to use their house is a little to far in right field to let happen. What happen later???????????????/
Damn It.
Ok. I gave it a 3 grade because it was well written, if a bit hurried.
As for the ending; let's just say I won't be reading more of your stories. The main character does some strong things in this story, but I still have to file it under the "wimp" catagory. Not my cuppa. If you like reading that type of story then this was ok. If you are like me then I'll just pass on the rest of your library.
Dave
Complete Bullshit, and your logic doesn't fly.
A woman who loves her husband doesn't have sex with 17 different men, get pregnant and then start parading men through the house, further humiliating her husband.
One look at a yellow page ad and she goes off the deep end? Any woman would start asking if he was thinking about selling the house, and what would getting pregnant do to save the house anyway in the long run?
Where is the love between them? This was more a marriage based on high priced things, not a loving commitment for life.
His mom wanting grandchildren so desperately that she need psychiatric treatment? Please!
Then to top it off, his dad just shrugs off her cheating and the not so minor fact that the baby does not belong to his son, and starts going into some bullshit comparison with a drunken joyride? Comeon, I expected some pretty weak bullshit explanation from you, but this is laughable at best.
I have to thank you though, you have reminded why your stories are not worth reading.
Was this ghost written?
The resolution sounds like almost every single CDE mother story where the cuckold has problems with what is going on, tells his story to his family, and they think he's just being stupid and selfish. It's asinine then, it's asinine now.
The only thing that prevents this from being the worst and dumbest story this writer has posted is one I found on another site. A guy moves in next door and has a series of women over, which escalate to gangbangs. Husband is away, comes home early, and can see across the way that it's his wife's turn. He confronts her and wants a divorce. The next day before he can file, the other guy and some friends appear at the door. The subdue him and proceed to rape him for several hours while the wife is taking pictures. When they leave, she tells him that she loves him, doesn't want a divorce, and only did this to keep him from going through with it. As long as they remain married, the pictures will not be seen. She claims that she only wanted to experience it once and has not intention of repeating it -- unless he makes a stink about it. (She also claims that he is a better lover than any of the guys, that they were just cock after cock.) She claims that he got an erection during it, which proved he liked it, which is the same bullshit defense attorneys have tried in rape cases for years. In the end he capitulates and fucks her. Yeah right, she loves him and arranges for him to be anally raped by a series of men. It's the old, "I'd hate to see what you'd do if you hated me" routine.
Interestingly, the story disappeared after a day or two. I can only assume the write got trashed so badly for it he took it down.
Deperation Without Thought
Pretty much sums up this contribution to Literotica. Definately not one of your better efforts, but nobody can bat 1000. I'd pretend I never wrote this one if I were you. I know the next one is better thought out.
Shawn
Well, you fooled me Bob
All the way through I thought you were writing your first story about a real man.
But you remnained true to type and wimped him out big time.
Then again, with a stupid father like his, he didn't really have a chance.
This is what I got about the wife from the story
1. She doesn't trust her husband or care about him enough to talk to him about their problems or about what she talked to his mother about. 2. She feels that their status in life is more important than the love of her husband. She needs the Beemers and the country club membership more than him. 3. She continues to fuck around on him because she has "needs"? What the fuck is that? Needs are food, water and shelter. I think she was thinking about "wants" instead. Like more cheating sex.
And his parents, especially after the dad finds out about her cheating ways. Him and his wife essentially paid for the daughter-in-law to cuckold the husband. I think the mother should be told this and be told in as graphic manner as possible. "Hi Grandma, here is your bastard grandchild."
To my way of thinking, the husband should divorce his cheating wife, have his parents care for and pay for everything that the bastard needs until he is eighteen, and go find him a woman that really loves him.
How many times do people have to read it-Cheating equals not loving spouse! No exceptions!
Make money off the whore!
This author typically has great stories but this ending was terrible. The husband should have charged all the johns for this whore and made enough money to divorce this slut & get a real wife. Too bad the husband's father did not take the slut for ride, then get her knock-up-kill two birds with one stone. To the author-please add a another sequel and make sure the husband get revenge on this slut.
GOD please don't do a sequel!
Ignore that request for a sequel anjust let this die a natural death
Don't like the ending..
I love happy endings, but this one hasn't one. The wife is such a selfish slut that she doesn't realize the damage she did to her husband. ONLY, and I mean ONLY if she knows what she did to her husband is when I can say they can recover their marriage. O.K., so she made a mistake, I can deal with it, but going on to have sex because her husband denies her, is just fucking stupid.
HELLO BITCH, but why does your husband react that way? YES!!! Because YOU fucked up the marriage. You fucked a little bit more than a dozen men. I wouldn't touch you with a stick. Don't you care about YOUR husbands needs? ACCEPT your stupid decisions and deal with it!!
Fuck, I reacted like this was real, but come on!!! This is just ridiculous... God have mercy on the poor little hubby...
no logic
this story has no logic. she wanted to get knocked up fast so she screws 17 men. it would take about 21/2 weeks to screw that many. as she did not screw one every day it took longer and then ther would be about 2 weeks before sh had an decent idea she was knocked up. then when her tells it like it is and reacts accordingly she becomes a slut. this is not a marriage of equals but of a female dom. did not like it at all has to be the worst story u have written
This one left me a little sick at my stomach - -
This story was well written, but I only gave it a one because
zero wasn't an option.
Sick ... unrealistic. If anyone has done this, they and their
whole family are sick.
Dump the slut, dump the asshole parents and get your self
respect back. Get a DNA test and sue the father.
Really sick story.....yuk.
Nice Try - But No Reality- Cuckolding Again
Almost gave a 25 based on talented writting - the authors SICK INHUMANE BASTARD BABY scenario killed that. This story of cuckolding was not even close to being believeable due to authors own setting of reasonableness and dignity on his part and her status and financial seeking being at odds with his values.
The follow up fucking CUCKOLDING would have sealed her fate with any normal non-sick male but the author minipulated the braindead wimpy pitiful husband (male) again for the excuse to cause more humiliating sick sex (CUCKOLDING) for the sake of the story but no consequence for her as demanded by life's realities.
This left me very uncomfortable and angry at the real possibilties of the story that the author chose not to exercise so that a cuckolding theme could be spewed forth again by him - more sick pitiful male demeaning shit from a talented author who can't spell c o n s e q u e n c e!!!!!
Interesting that you allowed public response tho - to measure our reactions is good - failure to understand that only really sick sorid people are jaded enough to get overheated on pitiful dehumaning male humiliation!!!
Gosh sick one - what a waste of talent - selfishly we hope you will please reconsider the opportunities of truly entertaining us - not disgusting us. little regard
I'm sorry
Those are the words she never said. She did it for money. So would it have been okay if she became a prostitute because she thought they needed the money? Then she rubs his face in it. Now that she still has no remorse he is the one who has to make things up to her? I don't get that.
dumb ending
daddy says a few words, takes no responsibility, blames everything on the son, and son takes it? that is so out of character for the son as laid out before, for me it ruins the story.
not to mention the unbelievable "mom will go mad if there is no baby" fairy tale. that is the basis for the whole setup.
If that were to happen to me.......
I'd give her every damn thing I have and get the hell away from her and start over.
Needs a few more chapters
Natural sex at its best!
Lot of storyline potential but no real follow-thru
I’m glad I’m not the only one that did not like this story. There are many problems with it and I’ve listed them below.
1. This story is not at all erotic.
2. Camryn and Dave did not want children and should have told Dave’s parents from the beginning, instead of being afraid. The father later admits that Bob and Laura told them they didn’t want to have any and that is alright.
3. Camryn and Dave live well above their means and should have lived modestly and saved money for the future.
4. Without any communication, Camryn just assumes that Dave is thinking of selling the house based on the open book of the Yellow Pages.
5. Even if the house was being sold, Camryn does not truly love Dave, as she should be willing to live in a cardboard box as long as they are together.
6. Why did the mother only talk to the wives about the money? Shouldn’t her own flesh-and-blood children also be involved?
7. Camryn claims that there wasn’t time but she could have at least took an hour to discuss her concerns and the situation with Dave and see if they could have come up with a good solution. She claims she was in a race but a whole month passed before she saw the Yellow Pages. An extra hour would not have mattered.
8. Camryn’s only reason for doing this is because she does not want to give up the house and thinks the money should be used to pay off the mortgage. Okay, then what about the money needed to raise the baby? Raising children costs a lot of money.
9. Camryn had unprotected sex with seventeen strange men at different times and isn’t worried about any diseases.
10. Camryn doesn’t want to know who the father is but this leaves the kid with possible medical problems that only knowing family history would help prevent.
11. How about if the mother adopts a child instead of forcing her sons and their wives to have children?
12. Anyone that needs psychiatric help only because she doesn’t have grandchildren probably should not be around children.
13.Camryn claims to still love Dave but she fails to realize and understand his hurt. With some time and counseling they might be able to repair things. Instead, Camryn uses his reluctance as an excuse to sleep around.
14. After Camryn has Bradley and is cleared for sex, we do not hear anything more about him. Who is taking care of Bradley while she is sleeping around? By the end of this story he should almost be two years old and asking questions.
15. To put up with strange men coming into his house and fucking his wife for a year is without any reaction is dumb. Did Dave plan on living like this forever?
16. The father is not shocked or disgusted in anyway by the story Dave tells; especially the fact that Bradley is no blood relation to him or his wife in any way.
17. A stolen car and drunken joy ride is no comparison to what Camryn did. Camyrn was fully aware of what she was doing and even rationalized it.
18. The father is more concerned about his wife then Dave's feelings in the whole matter.
19. The father's dicussion with Dave solves the whole problem in less than a day.
20. After a year of sleeping around, Dave should have Camryn tested for any diseases before being intimate.
A better way for this story to have gone was to possibly have Bob or the father impregnate Camyrn or to expose Camyrn and let the chips fall where they may.
I will say that the story is well written. Else wise, I was disappointed and upset, as evidence by this large review.
Anonymous=Shit
Raters on this site that sign off as being Anonymous must each shit for Breakfast, Lunch, Supper/Dinner. Why are they afraid of identifying themselves, even with an Email address?
This story is the true human condition, so why are they afraid of identifying with it?
Please - No Sequel
Not erotic, not interesting, not well written.....
Not one thing good.
Not erotic, not believable, not well written, not even worth the computer memory to store it. Sorry.
As for you, don87654, the reason so many of us sign Anonymous is because we know that people like you that enjoy this type of story would constantly be sending us all kinds of nasty emails insulting us for our comments which, by the way, the author asked for. If you like this stuff and want to leave a good comment, then fine, that’s your business. I’ve read this story, looked at the other comments, left my own comment, and I’m moving on.
Comments on comments
I guess that it is safe to say that the story was not just disliked, but disliked intensely. For those of you who begged that there be no sequel, consider your wish granted not that there was going to be one anyway.
I would like to point out to some of the critics that it is only a made up story and in made up stories AIDs and unwanted pregnacies don't exist unless the author wants them to exist. People in stories do not act rationally any more than people in real life do. In fact, in stories they can be less rational than peoplr in real life because they do not have to face the consequences that real people do.
As for the comments that the story was not well written I can only say that if I was any good at this stuff I would be sitting at my keyboard pounding out the Great American Novel instead of amusing myself writing erotic fiction (catch that part - fiction?)for Literotica.
That said, I would like to thank everybody for their feedback, both good and bad; one can always pick up a kernal of knowlege from some of it.
Very, Very, Very, Very good!
Very good! Nuf said!
This needs a conclusion
Author;
I enjoy & look forward to your work. However, this story needs a fitting revengeful end or multiple endings. Please consider, writing a conclusion that is not wimpy. This stupid whore needs to be punished.
Keep up the great work.
Sorry
Sorry Bob. Your writing is normally excellent but this is one of the most absurd stories I have read.
FUCKING ABSURD
The wife went out and fucked countless number of men to get pregnant just because she saw the name of a realtor in the yellow pages where her husband left the phone book open to which made her think that he was going to sell the house. Are you fucking kidding me. The whore never even asked the husband about it. If you ask me the slut wanted to cheat, saw an openning and took it. No man in his right mind would belive this bullshit, and they wouldn't stay married to a whore like this.Yes i know its a fantast,but atleast make the story somewhat believable.
Usual crap
Dear asswipe english bob, you will write any kind of a story with any kindf of a plot just so you can justify some wife having extramaritial sex.
You are disgusting!!!!!
Give another author a chance to end this?
Dear author;
Would you consider giving another author a chance to end this story the correct way? This stupid slut needs to be punished. Let us know!
Superlative
What a lovely, sensitive story. Even better than your usual extremely good.
Unrealistic crap
Marriage is dead. If she had truly been committed to it she would have discussed the issue with her husband first. Told him about the deal his mother had made, asked for his views.
She didn't. She leapt to conclusions and did something she had to know was highly destructive to any marriage. Even if she had the best intentions in mind that is the totally wrong approach to building and maintaining a loving relationship.
All that crap from the father - total bullshit. Usual reaction would be "divorce the bitch". After all, the child isn't actually part of the family - no genetic link whatsoever.
bunch of crap
pardon me while i throw up.....aint no family,,ni in laws and no husband ever going to be ok with a whore like that.
not erotic, nor sexy
and not realistic, even for a fantasy. can a guy who is used to pussy really go for a year w/o having one?
dont think so. unless, he becomes gay.
Thumbs down
The conclusion I draw from the story is that it's okay to be unfaithful so long as there's financial gain involved and the married couple "love" each other.
Doesn't wash.
Poor Ending
Bob,
This story showed good promise, but went horribly wrong. No man would accept his wife having an affair (let alone multiple affairs) for the purpose of just getting pregnant. There would be a divorce, and DNA would prove he is not the father, and would get his name off the birth certificate. Considering the manipulation caused by his parents, that would be cause to tell them that they caused his marriage to end, and that the child was not their grandchild.
If I had been in this situation, I would have announced the facts at a family meeting, before the baby’s birth. I would have filed for divorce, and quite possibly asked for a restraining order from the slut wife. As far as the grandparents health – to hell with them! They should suffer for causing the destruction of my marriage. Hopefully either they would die, lose their sanity, or suffer other health issues. I would end my relationship with them at that point.
Great reading!
That....is the way any cuckholding, cheating and impregnating fantasy story should read!
A Wimp!
okay. Okay. You gotta write a "wimp" one every now and then.
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