Pretender

Awwww

cute and sexy. you feelsexy and you are sexy..and i love your opening paragraph..sucked me right in

Guffaw!

Colonel Sanders? Cardboard popup valentines? Boobs that shift around like adjustable seats in a car? Heavens to murgatroyde, doc, you have one bee-yoo-teeful imagination! This tickled me pink.

Cheers,
AriO

Guffaw!

Colonel Sanders? Cardboard popup valentines? Boobs that shift around like adjustable seats in a car? Heavens to murgatroyde, doc, you have one bee-yoo-teeful imagination! This tickled me pink.

Cheers,
AriO

"...rumors of underwear..."

Lovely. Thoroughly enjoyed every word, and this sentence caught my eye, making me smile:
"Lacy wore his gaze like it was a piece of jewelry made especially for her."
Excellent job, Doc.

Interesting Story.

This was a fun fantasy which addresses the desire all of us have to change something about ourselves, and that outer appearances aren't always important.

De-meaning Women

De-mean me next please!! I Loved this little story. Nice plot. Thank you.

Very good

Such a fine blend of humour and romance.

Waiting for my special card now.

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This was a fun, sexy romp of a story. :)

"We do chicken right."

A crispy drumstick of a story, juicy on the inside, and served with a biscuit. Thank you, Colonel.

Doc, you old Romance writer you.

I've got a gift membership waiting for you in the RWA. :)

Clever, well-constructed, great characters, intriguing plot, nice twist at the end, plus some other excellent items I'm proably forgetting--not bad for what was only your second Romance.

Congratualtions, Doc, you done did good.

Rumple

My Favorite Valentine Story

Lacy's mirror sequence is worth reading by itself- it's practically a masturbation scene, only hotter.

So sweet!

Awww that's the cutest thing I've ever read! I don't know why but even though the main message is pretty well known it made me tear at the end. Superb!

wow.. what a great read - warming to the heart.

I find that funny. Arty received the real gift while Lacy was purely superficial, would have been more poetic if Lacy did change back but Arty loved her anyway.