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by Syndra Lynn02/05/05

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that last stanza. Nice!

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by duckiesmut02/06/05

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I love how the words you pair together fit in such a way to last in the reader's mind. "Textured desire" had my brain marching for a longggg time. :)

"dreams steer southward
as molten glass finds
cracks in mirrored wisdom
filling in textured desire"

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