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All Comments on 'The Young Bride of the Vampire Ch. 03'

by keelslight

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

need an editor.. plenty of word misuse. It distracts from the story because the reader has to figure out what word the author meant to use.

keelslightkeelslightalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Someone can volunteer

For the editing. I pretty much just write a draft and post it.

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