All Comments on 'Mind Tango'

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CliterateDykeCliterateDykealmost 6 years ago

This was really nicely written. Better than nicely, it was sexy & beautifully masked in terms of character gender until after climax. Really creative & unique.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
The power of ambiguity

A brilliant demonstration of the power of delicate ambiguity in the hands of a superb craftsman. (No genderification intended, of course, ‘cause that was part of the fun.) The piece also illustrates the difference between intensely erotic writing and “tab P in slot C” overwrought explicitness. Please keep up the great work.

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