All Comments on 'Mum's Friends Ch. 08'

It’s a great story and I can’t wait for the next chapter! But my one criticism is you seem to be adding more and more women every chapter, wha happened to just Jo, Jill and Debbie? Also are Jill and Debbie ok with all this? Seems like you are adding way to much way to fast and As a reader I am getting lost with the whole thing. It’s still a great story and I can’t wait for the next one.

Still too much.

Change characters with previous characters still talking.

Hard to follow