All Comments on 'Space Bar'

Nice how you wove a couple of old "dad jokes" in there!

... and not remember Tatooine was the planet from Star Wars IV.

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Short sharp and interesting. Good job :)

You did a nice job of repurposing several words other than Tatooine. It was kind of fun to see what would come next. This was a clever little story, very straightforward. Traj wasn't human was he? I assumed he was at first, but later on something seemed alien about him. Can't put my finger on what.

It probably could have benefitted from some more proof reading, but a handful of typos aren't enough to distract me from a quality story. I liked it.

Loved the Space Bar joke, and story. Five Stars. I'm a very old dad, and Grandpa, who lives telling his old jokes.