All Comments on 'Hot Tub Heaven'

Exciting but not believable !

It was fairly tame. It could have gotten very erotic in the hot tub but fell flat. Next time let’s have the missus let out some pent up feustifeom her hubby leaving her high and dry.

You first lost me at the use of "hors d'oeuvers and appetizers". They're the exact same thing, one being a French word and the other English. Then you went on to make several blatant grammatical errors, which I can usually egnore, but had already been pulled out of the story. I continued anyway only to find the story to be highly unlikely and lacking in any form of passion.

:)