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by Anonymous

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by oggbashan02/09/05

Deleted with thanks

I have deleted all the public comments on this story because they refer to the original unrevised version.

The story now has a changed ending and the hero has the same name throughout.

Thank you to those who commented and sent feedback pointing out what a mess I had made of the original version. Your remarks have modified the story into what it now is.

This shows that some authors do actually take notice of criticism, especially when it was well deserved.

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by Munachi03/12/07

very nice...

haven't read the original version so can't say anything to that, but this revised version is very nice in any case, i enjoyed reading it!

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by Anonymous09/26/15

Your demonstrations get better

Thank you Ogg.
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