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what a romp!
Lovely prose-poem... gave my sluggish mind some tugs, and made me smile. Nice ironies, good language.
mention
your poem was mentioned on the thread
'NEW POEMS REVIEWS'
Thanks for the Journey~
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Some great thoughts and phrases here. I only wish you would use another format. A simple paragraph tends to reduce the impact of your insight (IMHO).
did you forget the quotes?
" After noons will be
measured out, measured out, and
measured with coffee spoons, and T.S. Eliot "
Crash Test Dummies
one mans trash
is another womans treasure, but this is jumbled, junkie, runstogethernearlyunreadable. Clean it up, give it a shape try again
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