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Sweet Scents In Midsummer

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by Du Lac02/07/05

I liked this..

The essence of the poem is excellent, but I found too much repetition in it to have the force of the message to sink in... the foundation of this is very good.. I would rewrite, because it is a good poem..just need a little tweaking..
thank you for the read..
Du~

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