Poker Loser

keep it cumming

A great start to a series that could eclipse Office Play!

So hot !

What a great story - boy, this was hot ! Can´t wait to read the next chapter.

Me too - more

Hi:

I still can't wait for more of Office Play .. but also want more of this!!

alex

Great Read!

Good story! This one was believeable!
Thanks for writing!
Sexmate

A series, most definately!

Unbelieveably hot and so well written, please do continue the adventure!

Great start

Yes please make it a series. Thanks

that was so mean to us!

A testament to how great a writer you have become is that I love Office Play, and immediately read this because I saw who wrote it. PLUS, as much as I hate anal sex scenes, and get grossed by it, you made this so hot, I can forgive you for jumping to anal before you took her virginity. You must write more, you must continue these two characters, and he must make her reluctantly lose her virginity too! I think you wrote this with a true eye on passion and eroticism, as well as a true reluctant female. Nice job.

Poker Loser

Poker Loser

Really enjoyed reading your story....unusual in that he left her a virgin..showing he wasn't just a rapist. Thanks for your effort

An excellent peice of work

This is two for two so far. Keep up the good work.

Great story

Loved this story. Giving myself up to someone after losing a game of poker has been a personal fantasy! A series would be great! Keep 'em coming!

Very Well Told

very well described poker card games i find erotic.Quite believeble as well keep up the good writing.

Poker winner

One of the best ever of its kind.

As always...

I haven't visited here for a couple of years and as I was reading a few, I stumbled across this one. Fantastic as usual. I was a fan of your stories back then and they still stand up as great. Keep it up.

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i'm confused.
she had a dildo inside her but she remained a virgin?

Great

Great story!

very nice

again

This is my 2nd time reading this series... it is sooo hot. kudos for writing a story that is good enough to read multiple times.

Extremely well written and hot. Thank you

Hmmmmm

I'd love to do that to my sister in law.

Surprisingly compact

A fast moving story with fun action and believable setup.
There are some continuity issues and a few logical errors, but the story was interesting enough to not worry about them.

While knowing it's all fiction here, I appreciated that Todd was careful of Alison while having his way with her: her pleasure was important to him too.

Looking forward to more soon.

Virgin

This was hot, though I did feel bad that her first time was a nonconsent scenario. I kind of wish you'd played up more of the 'cockteasing, snobbish princess' angle.

My biggest thought (and honestly it distracted me heavily enough that I fell out of the erotic mood somewhat) was her virginity. Does she have a hyman or not? I kept expecting him to pop her hyman with the dildo. Or for him to discover it and back off somewhat. It seems like the dildo was all the way in so I guess the hyman got popped from a previous accident. I guess I'll find out in chapter 3.

I REALLY HATED THIS!

This was really bad! I wish after she was used, she would break out, tie todd down, and do the same to him, but with a fake dick. I also wished she left him there, cut out the parts of her on the camera, and call the police. THAT would have been good.