All Comments on 'Lilith's Emporium: Inner Demon'

Something tells me this fan of yours was also a marvel fan! XD

This was fantastic! I'd be lying if I said I didn't want more of this!

it had me glued could not stop reading,sad when it ended

This is epic and I loving the seris but I was wonder how u did requests but anyway here’s mine if u see it

How about a story of a shy but kind heart guy going into the shop trying to find a way to fix his extreme sexual fantasy that he has as it hard for him to get turned on because of these fantasy’s he created so nessiera ask if he has a girlfriend and he says yes but is a bitch to him but he wants to see the good in her so he takes the verbal abuse and it was her telling him he got a problem and he should go seek help but Nessiera says it natural to have fantasies and suggestions he get a speical statue of a demon ( insert demon name as I’m not good at making them) where she will give any sexual fantasy no matter how strange, weird or crazy it is and in return he loves and cares for her and so he doesent believe but she gets him to buy it, he does he goes home and what u think happen happens the bitch girlfriend is gotten rid of and the demon is now using her like the demon wife one and then he get to the sex part which u can create what happen and he finds out but still love her coz she love him and there we go. My biggest fetish is monster girls idk why but it always has so idk his fantasy she gives him she transforms into a monster girl and they have epic sex. This idea came from the fairy summon seris u did and idk if u continue it but the best part about it was the sexual fantasy that happens ( my fav is the alien theme one it too danm sexy) and I like story’s where the kind hearted guy is reward for his kindness u always see the guy is the problem or the girl seeking help so yeah my fav one is the demon wife so yeah that my request I don’t think u will read this but oh well wanted to ge it off my chest and if u do make it I would be the lucky guy alive

I like the history is great.

Thanks

This is the best story of your yet! It makes me think of the Beatles song "All The Lonely People" except Viri is all the lonely demons.

The best erotic horror to me are always the lonely anti-heroes looking for love. Dracula, the Phantom of the Opera, the Wolfman... They all fit the archetype, the lone character hated and hunted in love with someone they can easily kill or destroy if they make the tiniest mistake in how they love and seduce them.

While the story and sexual content were both good, the spelling and grammar distracted from the story. I feel like just running over it and editing it closely will allow you to get a better end result.

Just a little editing and grammar correction would go a long way to making this more enjoyable. The premise is fantastic, the sex is hot, and the characters are good, but again, the clunky syntax intrudes.

Can we all just acknowledge the fact that this is Venom but instead of an alien from space it's a magical sex slime. Like, it's good, but at the same time... Holy fuck.

Sexy love story!