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good idea
But poorly written. Rushed feeling.
A good short story.
I liked the story and thought that it was written with true feelings. Do not let negative opinions like the last commentor. Ruin your enjoyment of writting.
I liked it..
I thought it was a good story. Perhaps a little thin on the backgrounds of the two lovers but all in all a good story.
Sweet
A sweet romantic story in the spirit of Valentine's Day.
Good luck.
Great Story.
A perfect Valentines treat. Loved it!
There you are!
So this is where you get off to when you're not sitting on the couch sharing a bowl of popcorn with me! Nice work Moonlight. Really enjoyed the romance, and I'm not even a romantic! Thanks for sharing it!
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