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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/18/05

Different

This was very different and it shows the twisted mind of the author

Brian

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by absintheminddgrl06/02/05

!!

This is dark and beautiful! My favourite piece on the site so far!
Your poetry is troubling and fantastic!

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by Mr. Unsexy01/21/07

damn

i tried something with this format once and thought it came out decently. thanks for actually doing it well :)

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