All Comments on 'Collateral Ch. 07'

...Read this on GA. Excited to reread it here. You are extremely talented. I absolutely love this story. Would buy it if you published it. Really!

Aww, Anon, you're so sweet! My online serialized work will remain free for anyone to read it. I am planning a new series, however, so stay tuned! Also, all novelties about what I write, what I have already published, or I publish, will be posted on my tumblr. :)

Will Jake be enough to change Klaus's not committal ways? There is a hint that he just might! As controlling as Klaus is with everything, Jake could actually be his undoing. Klaus seems to have an unrealistic very high opinion of himself! Like he is Gods gift to the world. Maybe Jake can take him down a peg or two by causing him to fall head over heals in love with him. But he certainly has his work cut out for him to do so.

Jake should refuse to cooperate or do anything Klaus asks of him until that fucking chastity device is removed permanently! And the punishment thing is a bit over the top as well! Maybe Klaus will come to understand his treating Jake like a boy toy and a child in not conducive to building trust!

Well, as they say, love is a battlefield :)

But don't worry. Jake is a fighter. The best kind. Klaus is, indeed, set in his ways. How that will change, you will find out as the story unfolds. Thank you for the interest you took in the story and your long comments!

Jake has had numerous unwanted gay erections from arousal around Klaus in the first few chapters. Then Klaus puts a chastity cage on Jake which are uncomfortable during an erection. So in chapter 6 Klaus lures Jake into masturbating him - and Jake is so turned on he is tempted to suck Klaus' penis - yet not one mention of Jake getting aroused with an erection in an uncomfortabble chastity cage. Duh! Seriously? Otherwise a great story.