All Comments on 'The Island'

needs more tease, more about the 5, more sex. just way too short. must have written it during a coffee break

This reminds me of the time my wife and I took a paddle boat out onto the pond near our home. We soon saw a kayak containing a man and a woman approaching us. Even my wife, who was no slouch in the boobs department (40DD on our wedding day), stared open-mouthed at the lovely blonde lady's gigantic knockers, clad only in a red bikini top that was much too small for its task. Naturally, I stared also. The Mrs. caught me staring and teased me about it for days thereafter. ( o ) ( o )

I wrote it whilst waiting for my cup of tea to cool. The lady I wrote it for was due round that afternoon and asked me to write her something with a number of features - this was the very quick result. She liked it well enough. Not my best but not my worst either. Lol