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Girls Do it Better Ch. 01

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by Punji02/09/05

Needed more setup

Needed more setup. No sense of who the characters are, why they are there, or why I should care.

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by JenniElizabeth03/20/10

agreed

that was too quick. No build up this story could have been a good one, but not any story as to how they met, or how they bcame lovers,anral ended too so.

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