All Comments on 'you didn't hear the song'

This one has a great musicality to it, Liar; a rhythm that carries the reader along. Very nice.

Just a quick question....How does one "slide a breath"?

you seem to be toying with a new dialect... it made me slow down and look closely. The second stanza was difficult for me to tie the pieces together. To try to figure out which phrase went with which.

Having said this, much enjoyed!

Drew me in almost as much as your words.

Beautiful Liar.

I love the title so I read the poem. This is good, I loose

my way and reread adjusting the volume, its good poetry.

it was already there

the scent of fingertips

longing skin to rest upon

for beads to quill a trace

to slide a breath so close

a breathless face <--outstanding lines, and I love how you ended this poem. Flowed smooth, and I like the throw in of rhymes here and there. Thanks for the read, saldne

I turned my volume up full blast and

I didn't hear the song ...either <grinin'>

great poem ...okay I'm lieing <laughin>

I didn't turn up the volume <smile>

...to you with baited breath...another please.