by funandbold
This series could be really hot but it really needs an editor to do some refining. It is way too rushed through that the sex scenes are all kind of boring and similar. Though I do have to say the time with Cory was the hottest out of all three men.
Please try slowing down a little and adding more detail, some decent dialog during sex is usually really hot too. I'm hoping the next chapter will be better with more of Cory.
i have been reading about the inner ring i think mine has been rubbed
but never entered i want to experience that
more more more
james_38671 at yahoo.
WOW, that is the best rim job every. I had rim job of like 15 or 20 minutes. All the things he did would had to have been much longer and the technic was outstanding. I would love to find someone like that and I would never let him leave. It really got me turned on. The breeding was great too.