Woulda, Coulda, Shoulda

A Perfect Skewer

A great sendup of the standard "teenage boy seduces all the women in sight" stories that produce nothing but loud laughter, from me anyway. A definite winner.

Fun story with a fun ending

A real fun read. Had me chuckling with it's "reality". Got to go and see if the author has any more listed in Literotica. Thanks for the contribution.

Very good story.

It seems that fantasy never compares to the real thing.

Very Entertaining

I generally don't comment on too many stories, and, in any event, I usually like stories with incredibly slutty woman, but I don't seem to be able to resist your stories. They are very entertaining and DIFFERENT. Good work.

great story

Andrew, you scored again. thanks.

Gary

cute Mr Wiggins!

Hi thebullet,
That was too funny - and maybe an altogether too accurate description of our perpetually over-inflated male egos. I didn't score it a perfect 100 because it was a little short - when I read your stuff, I like the experience to last a little longer - ha!
On an unrelated note, I just finished reading Twice Lucky part 1 and noticed that your name was mentioned. Joe aknowledged that you two knew each other through your writing and clued me in that Eamon Turner was the great grandson of Jake Turner! I now feel like I hold some kind of secret to the universe or something! - too funny. I look forward to more of your E-Kid Adventures, good sir.
Take care,
Brian

Good one....

Had a great laugh..thanks!!

Hilarious

Just what I needed today. Thanks Bullet.

a nonny mouse

An interesting little story and a breath of fresh air. It is nice to run across one like this occasionally. Keep it up!

Love is a State of Mind

And the story could go on and on.... It was an interesting writing twist. Good thinking. "Let the games begin..."

GREAT !!!!!

You have a great mind...What a great writer. Loved it.

Great Story!!

What a relief to read a well written story full of humor. I laughed as soon a I began to figure out what was happening. Thanks!

Hilarious!

I have to admit, I almost gave up on this story by the end of the first part, but then I saw the comments in italics and decided to read further. The story should have been under humor/satire, but nevertheless, it was an enjoyable enough read. Quite amusing.

e z lay

Stories are more interesting when the guy is not a Walter short story of fantasy. So what if she laughed, if she is talking to you she will go to bed.
And yes got the point the story was about horndogs, but there is nothing erotic or literature about horndogs.

I needed a good laugh today

Thanks bullet.
Good story, 3 good POV's

A hoot

Walter Mitty in the age of porn. The references to the mother's sheets are terrific.

Waste of time on this site....

Bunch of bullshit!

Don87654 doesn't like me very much

Pay no attention to the little man jerking off behind the curtain. It's only DON87654 On his own little pregnancy trip. I guess I've made fun of him once too many times cause he sure doesn't like me or my work.

What's a person to do? Sorry Don, no extra-marital pregnacies in my stories. It doesn't turn me on.

Have a nice day.

This was my first of your stories...

May I say I loved it! I actually know a few guys who should read this story, especially the one I work with. :D I will be back for more bullet soon.

Going, going, gone!

I really enjoyed this story. It was stolen from my mind! Are you a Vulcan using the famous mind-meld? Is it possible others fantasize as I do? I liked it a lot!

Funny

Laughed my ass off. Thanks for a great story.

different

a little strange but i thought the mommy part was good, definately could see this guy having some reallly undiscovered fetishes! and as far as that Don whatever guy goes ignore him. the guy says everything sucks yet has none of his own works and makes no effort to be constructive. i thought it was a good effort for being different!

got past the beginning and then i GOT IT

I thought the story was just a really sappy romance in the beginning. I almost gave up on it. But then it turned completely around. I understood what the beginning was about and I realized: it was just funny.

clever

i like your stories. they're very different and very imaginative. sexy and cerebral.

Way funny

Somehow I missed this little gem. It made me laugh at myself because, sad to report, I've been where the main character was a time or two. ;)

It's good to see that some things remain constant. don87654 still fantastizes about extra-marital pregnancies two years later. Maybe if you had one of your characters dream about an extra-marital pregnancy, don would like yer stories. Naw, he'd still hate it cuz they make yah think and stuff. :D

Amused as hell

rofl! The funniest thing I've read in here. Hats off!

That was something else.

Oh my god...I really wasn't expect that when I started this story. Great job.

Thank you

I love it! For every stupid author with illogical plots and characters there is an author like you that makes readers still return to literotica to find gems like this. Thank you!

HaHa

OMG, that was funny. Thankyou for the good laugh.

That was the greatest thing i ever read.... I LOVED IT!

LOL

that was great. very clever

A Pretty Good Read

Wonderful. I think it should belong to the 'Humour' category. Shouldn't it?

Razor sharp

I love the writing of Ender Wiggin, didn't know he posted under "thebullet" on this site. Short, sweet and insightful.

Wicked Sense of humor

Wicked Sense of humor

Do me a favour will you?

Please write some more Loving Wives stories. Damn it I am now crying with laughter!

i like your style

a wife that's not a slut and keeps her legs closed.

A fun little story

Had me chuckling. Very good turn about with the wishful parts. I enjoyed it.

I can't believe this:

This story has been hanging out here since 2005 with no comment?

It's the funniest thing on this site!

Not only that, it encapsulates the entire modus operandus of the average, inadequate frustrated, young man so well that it takes me back fifty years.

Except that this guy is braver than I ever was.

I don't care that you're wrong about that

and that there were already 38 comments (the most recent just a year ago) I still want to thank you for bringing this to my attention. Wonderfully funny and written with a beautiful economy of style. I can imagine that a lot of men can identify with the feelings of the youngster in this. It's going straight on to my favourites list.