All Comments on 'Roommate's Girlfriend'

Your writing (again!) is wonderful. I'm not usually one for lesbian stories, but I love how human your characters are. Brilliant!

Great story. Love the way you make the characters real. It's not often that you can describe unatractive characters (in the normal sense), yet still make them hot because of the action that takes place. I'm impressed, as always, and continue to look forward to future stories. Keep it up.

Hyper-reality. Intense. As always, fine style, economy, real characters realistically drawn.

Without a doubt, when it comes to action .. and very unusual action to boot ..you are one of my favorites. However it would have been a nice touch if you had asked her to keep the key.

As a previous reviewer noted, your writing has great economy, a quality for which I strive but usually fail. Utterly believable characters and very very sexy action. First rate.

While I realize this is a comment that will show up after a hiatus of --- what? --- six years since the last posting about the story, good writing stands the test of time. It is always a delight to discover lovely erotica that explores both the minds and the bodies of the characters.

The protagonist's repressed longings, her surprise at the idea of, and then the irresistible sounds of, anal sex, and finally the release of her pent-up desire as both giver and receiver of such an intimate, nasty-sexy, intensely satisfying sexual act are deliciously described.

A satisfying read --- thank you.

impressive story line. very good description of the characters. good job!