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by annaswirls02/08/05

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yes I have been in that corner....
:)

the purple shag cracked me up. ours is maroon

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by WickedEve02/08/05

uh

What are you doing with my sit-n-squeal and my purple shag? Those are sacred. :) Cute poem inspired by a weird place.

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by 02/08/05

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Nicely written, Remec. Flowed smoothly..

Although, I probably would have either separated the words into different lines--> "breathe relax breathe listen" OR put commas in between them. Same with "shudder sigh shudder pant"

Other than that, excellent!

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by BooMerengue02/08/05

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Good job, Remec! (snickering at the purple shag)

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by Trent_Dutch02/09/05

New Poem Reviews

Your Poem has been mentioned on the new Poem reviews thread for Tuesday 8th of February. I thoroughly enjoyed the poem.

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