All Comments on 'Summer Heat'

I was enjoying that until the male friend came in.

Short hot story up to that point.

I like your style , women just enjoying each other. A bit more background would be nice , but i appreciate that would alter the feel you are creating.

What can I say. I'm bi, the story is autobiographical, so works for me. Thanks for your response though.

Liked it but too short.

He is an unseeded asshole that didn't want her til he walked in on them,so fucking forget him