All Comments on 'Lit. Forum Fantasy'

Great Story

(drop the last paragraph, better to let

the reader create the never ending story...

Your literary Creation, I found wonderful

to read. The story line was a Lit Forum tale

that I find to be a clever idea, and possibly

not a very easy task, that you seem to have written

about naturally, and a magnificent.

thanks for the journey (*_*)

abs i love everything you do! that is no big surprised i liked this story too

As promised I have and am reading your work. I read a much earlier piece that you had written and the difference in the writing is amazing. This piece should everything. A touch of romance, a spark of anticipation, and an explosion of desire. Very good read, and the writing of a Literotica fantasy is very cool indeed.

Red