by j.v. junkins
Good story. I used to dream about something like that as I sat in the tractor for hours on end. Thanks for allowing my past to return to my present.
I spent a lot of hours on the tractor..wishing this would happen also...add some more chapters please....
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Slow down and let the story build, not a whamb-bam thank you mame
no way he would ever want to have her help around the farm as soon as she got back he would do everything he could to avoid and ignore her keep it realistic if his fist clenched every time she was around he sure wouldn't want to be near her and as said earlier way to rushed what you described should have been spread over months or years so she could show she changed and wanted to be close instead of fighting all the time stop writing until you learn more