All Comments on 'Cowboy's Delight'

by j.v. junkins

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ksporksporabout 19 years ago
Farm fun

Good story. I used to dream about something like that as I sat in the tractor for hours on end. Thanks for allowing my past to return to my present.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Farm Fun is good

I spent a lot of hours on the tractor..wishing this would happen also...add some more chapters please....

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dirtybear42dirtybear42about 19 years ago
TOO FAST

Slow down and let the story build, not a whamb-bam thank you mame

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Yeah, slow down

Take some time - develope some plot.

Lukas

mblackwolfmblackwolfover 18 years ago
more

i can see a part 2 to the story...just slow down some

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
dumb story

no way he would ever want to have her help around the farm as soon as she got back he would do everything he could to avoid and ignore her keep it realistic if his fist clenched every time she was around he sure wouldn't want to be near her and as said earlier way to rushed what you described should have been spread over months or years so she could show she changed and wanted to be close instead of fighting all the time stop writing until you learn more

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

They only think the parents didn't know

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