- All
Comments (36) - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
English
Very Good
Enjoyed it very much, thank you for sharing.
A lovely, erotic, romantic tale
Cat5 has been on my list of favorites forever. Every new story posted only solidifies my feelings. This story is beautiful, sweet, and sexy. If you read and like this, you should try some other Cat5 stuff, like "One Little White Lie" or "I Raise; Will She Call". You won't be disappointed.
GREAT
JUST GREAT. JUST FUCKING GREAT
I second
thebullet
What a wonderfull gift!
Thank you! For a great story! I don't think Shannon should be doing that very often! There will be trouble! Okay if it's just this one time! Why didn't Shannon stay and help out? Who was Beth sitting on the couch?
Thanks for writing!
Sexmate
great
a wonderful gift a great story
KUDO's Author
Thanks for the insightful look at a well conceived and packaged slice of a lifelike scenario.
Your efforts, time and talent are very appreciated - More Please - with Regards
Thank You
Thanx for a truly "Loving Wives" story. It was very erotic and fun.
I was a little thrown off when you put Beth in for Pam, must have been a typo, not enough to ruin the experience though.
Thank You!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good, but...
...who is Beth?
That was cute.
Also, gentle, sweet, and very erotic.
Good story!!
Another good story that I like. Definitely erotic, loving.
Loved it
Keep the stories coming
Well written
A very well written story that was also sensual. I have read some of your other work and found them to be of the same top caliber. Write well
A Loving Wives Tale?
Cat5 this is the first of your tales I have read. I am lucky to have found you and your tales. This was an excellent romantic tale. Thanks. I have to strech to call this a loving wives tale. i will make it a point to read you 'Loving Wives' Tales. USper
Very Hot!
Loved the story.
Very hot
This was an extremely erotic tale. I loved it.
Very erotic
Great plot and great writing. I really enjoyed it.
Really bad idea
You better not try this in reality!
Hot story
Lucky guy!
Sexy and I loved enough to give it 5*****s.
What is expecially like is the sex is not excessive or extreme something too many writers do. That makes what could be hot stories unpleasant and therefore not sexy.
A follow-on?
If there were to be a followup to this story, I was wondering what would happen if Shannon would let Pam join in? Just to assure a more complete healing for her sister. What if Pam wanted to go to the same university? She could stay with them, if Shannon didn't get to jealous. lol
5*'s of course.
ehh
dwarcock is still alive after all...lol
A wonderful love story.
Aside from some very minor spelling goofs, this is a well written story. Sex partners such as Shannon and the never-named narrator are relatively uncommon. I think their approach to helping Pam (also called Beth once after the sister-to-sister talk) was a great idea.
What might be interesting to see in a future story is how things play out over the next few years. Whats-his-name will be a tough act to follow and, based on the story's description of Pam's shyness, I have my doubts about her ability to be assertive enough with her would-be sex partners. Who knows? They may have to form a support group. lol.
Finished a story
It is refreshing that DWornCock can actually finish a story. AND score something other than '1'!
Story was instructive (pun intended!) Very sweet. However, unless Sis gets some practice in (and out and in and ...) fairly soon, she will need a refresher course. I agree that she is going to be spoiled when confronted with 'normal selfish' guys!
Semi-Decent
Good sex education tale but there was something not quite right about it. I don't know.
THOSE SECOND TIMES
brings on Polygamy and multi-marriages, TK U MLJ LV NV
Love has no boundaries 5 stars
This story although sexual demonstrates love has nothing boundaries. Pam's big sister Shannon wanted to relieve her little sister's personal shame and complex so that she could return to a well rounded healthy young college freshman and get her feet back on the ground. Of course there are great philosophical debates to be had about using ones intended spouse for such a task but the real intent was overwhelming and trumped the lewd innuendoes that could be tossed.Great dichotomy, it worked for me and the story. I think woman are more prone to the throes of jealousy and it didn't phase Shannon. Great story. Thanks again.
Delightful Tale
Of course anyone who is grumpy can find defects, but it seems more appropriate to just enjoy.
Hard to believe this piece of trash got high scores.
Scores HAD to be maniipulated
Now she owns him
Anytime she wants to fuck some guy, all she will say is; "but you had my sister!" I hope he knows he will be sharing his future wife with others, whether he wants to or not.
settle down analmousies
It's official, hell has frozen over! Cause I am actually going to mostly agree with betrayedby. Yeah? Surprised me also!
I think the problem I have with the premise of this story, is the failure to practice safe sex. Okay, probably "I" is described being educated in sex but the little sister's first time? That guy?
Blood tests and condoms all around. Until the "All Clear" sounds.
If this is suppose to be an 'educational' experience, I would grade it a failure. Cause it is obvious that Pam (as written by Cat5) is too psychologically immature to be taught sex the way you teach cats to swim.
As for k6 and analmousie...please put down the comic books and pick up a dictionary. Look up the definition for 'imaginary' and 'fiction'.
Take your boxes of crayons and some of your elementary school wide-lined paper. Now copy each definition one hundred times.
Heck & shucks, learning that much might finally get you out of fourth grade!
I see this story as an erotic fantasy; entertainment
Some of the comments are too serious. This is a fun fantasy story.
Cute and entertaining
I really liked it; 5*
Interesting
Funny and completely ridiculous.
Enjoyed it, but jealousy and hurt feelings would occur.
Educational indeed!
This may turn out to be double posted and if so I apologize. But I liked the story so much that it deserves to doubly commented on...
So far I've only read a few of Cat5s stories, but I will soon add to the total. This was the most appealing to me, and it was so on several levels.
1. The only sex education classes I ever got were of the "this goes there, and abstaining is the only answer" type. As for a college course on the subject? Ha!
2. This developed a relationship between the two primary characters in an understandable and realistic way.
3 The love of Shannon for her sister came across quite well.
4. The dangers were addressed clearly and cleanly, both physical and emotional. Both of the principle characters communicated their concerns, and the concerns were addressed lovingly.
5. Pam was dealt with in a loving manner, and taught by a master that sex, whether fucking or loving, should be pleasurable for both partners. That's extremely rare in our society.
6. The descriptions of sensual/sexual play were superb. Even I, as old and "experienced" as I am, learned new things, things that may be pleasurable to any future partners.
All in all, I was delighted to read this and am left with only one question, one voiced by others: Who is Beth?
Sweet, Loving Concept!
I'm becoming a CAT5 addict.
LOVE how much you blend in the female values and POV.
Hey, I'm a lifelong learner! :+))
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Second Time or
More submissions by Cat5.