All Comments on 'Buddy Suck Ch. 03'

spank your mothers ass and pussy and have them spank your balls, piss and more piss is also nice

I thought you were going to skip that scene... Shit!

Your poor usage of the language is totally distracting. You need a good proofreader or learn to improve your spelling, grammar and word usage. Our language is a rich one, but your usage is poor, at best.

The poor language skills takes so much away from the story. I got really tired of making the corrections in my head. It's such a chore, that I didn't even finish reading the whole story.

Please, please find someone to help you. If you'd like to go it alone, try using Microsoft Word or Open Office editing tools.

needed more details lack depth insome of its story line