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by Syndra Lynn02/11/05

tears

streaming. The poem is solid but fo r the last 3 lines. It would be a stronger poem without them, but still a moving, beautiful piece.

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by Anonymous03/03/05

Great

Beautiful poem, you caught the atomsphere of the dying. As a nurse I have experienced it many times and you are the only one I know of who has been able to put it close on paper. Thanks

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