All Comments on 'Chapel Affair'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Wow!

More, more!!! It would be so good to read the continuation of this story on a more expanded level. Flashbacks to past feelings of longing. Also where do they go from here? Really enjoyed it and hope you’ll write more. I love a slow burning love story!! Much love and many thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Too Fast

It is well written but you need to take a bit of time so that the reader can get to know the main characters. Look forward to your further work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Please write many more chapters. I'm smitten with this story!

BigrimmstalesTooBigrimmstalesTooalmost 6 years ago
Pacy passion

This was over almost before it started! Yet that is a good thing. It was a 'wham bam, thank you both mams' story. I see demands for more, but for me, less is more. Leave it where it is otherwise it will reach into cliche: girl marries wrong person (man), lots of angst along the way, finally girl marries girl usually after running away together Graduate style.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Might as well have a cookie cutter. Girl marries douchebag and immediately realizes that its her best friend she really loves. This theme is burned out and depleted. I know. I am sure to get the write your own stories. To that I respond be original.

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