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Spike this is tremendous. Such a great description of this woman, by showing her actions, her responses, her attire. I want to meet this woman once. Sand-- this poem deserves a title that reflects its complexity.
this poem
is mentioned in the new poetry reviews.
Nice!
I especially liked the last 3 lines:
not some suv driving Georgia O'Keeffe
but a bitter mother more beautiful than
her children.
depth
here..i read it 3 times already. You really summed her up, very well, and sadly, so sad she seems. excellent poem, sandspike, thanks!!
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Beautiful use of words to paint a moving painting of a painter.
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Excellent piece; my only question is how this woman you describe in such detail can be considered more beautiful than her children. She sounds so shallow and filled with bitterness.
artistic
Artistic people are beautiful ~ in their own special way.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,500 poems.
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A PERSON OF VALUES
having talent to waste. TK U MLJ LV NV
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