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by Tathagata02/11/05

Nice

slice of life.
almost haiku like and it's paints a big picture with so few words.
Well done

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by DeepAsleep02/11/05

Your Poem

Is mentioned in the New Poetry Reviews, in the Poetry Discussion Forum! Yay!

~D.A.

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by steve porter02/12/05

this is the beginning

of a good poem.

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by lindiana02/12/05

mmmmmmm

rhubarb pie...mmmmm

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