OH I like this story!!!I like it especially because the sister was the aggressor this time!! And it was hootttt!!
How about a follow up when he gets her ass?
Not bad at all. I liked how you did it. Give us a sequel where he gets her arse and just slow things down a little and it'll be a great story!
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Anonymous04/02/05
Limp
This story just doesn't seem realistic. There's no build-up, no believability. The details don't pan out. You're trying to tell me that 1) she doesn't remember where her brother works, 2) that he just happens to work for the same repair company her landlord uses 3) a day out of the fridge would totally spoil her cat's food and 4) she hasn't seen her brother recently (and he just happens to have evolved into a fuck-me-now god all of a sudden?) What a farce.
by
Anonymous08/07/05
When He Gets HER ASS ?
That's a comment from a real ASS_HOLE
DON
by
Anonymous03/12/06
below
this is a typical below average story. the author must have been masturbating while writing it.
by
Anonymous03/19/08
Not too good...
I normally love sibling incest tales, but this one just didn't do much for me.
by
Anonymous10/16/12
Fucking Crap
If you prick size is like this story you will never find it
English
A very good story!
OH I like this story!!!I like it especially because the sister was the aggressor this time!! And it was hootttt!!
How about a follow up when he gets her ass?
had potential
this story had potential, but the author seems to just have sex on the brain. No character depth, or even much of a description of them either.
Pretty good job
Not bad at all. I liked how you did it. Give us a sequel where he gets her arse and just slow things down a little and it'll be a great story!
Limp
This story just doesn't seem realistic. There's no build-up, no believability. The details don't pan out. You're trying to tell me that 1) she doesn't remember where her brother works, 2) that he just happens to work for the same repair company her landlord uses 3) a day out of the fridge would totally spoil her cat's food and 4) she hasn't seen her brother recently (and he just happens to have evolved into a fuck-me-now god all of a sudden?) What a farce.
When He Gets HER ASS ?
That's a comment from a real ASS_HOLE
DON
below
this is a typical below average story. the author must have been masturbating while writing it.
Not too good...
I normally love sibling incest tales, but this one just didn't do much for me.
Fucking Crap
If you prick size is like this story you will never find it
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