Poker Loser Ch. 03

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what a crock

most people would take it to the police and just tell their parents hey i got drunk and this guy took advantage of me and raped me .. then sue his ass his parents ass and everybody else he ever knew ..... i hope he gets hiv .... and dies a very slow death

It never stops amazing me

It never stops amazing me how many insecure people there are that sit around reading stories that they know deal with forced/reluctant sex, and then want to ease their own conscience by criticizing the author of a story they really enjoyed, but made them feel guilty. Your story was very energizing and stimulating, and your characters have a very true realism to them. When you make the wierd-o's feel guilty, you know you've done a 'Good Job'!
Ron

Great so far

This is your story, and I don't want to try to write it for you. Please, though, keep in mind that there is nothing wrong with a happy ending. Sure, it may offend some if they end up in love and married, but a lot of us would love that.

Good story

Keep the story going

Big Crock

I have to agree that is story line is a crock. There's absolutely nothing arousing about this story. Your main character is a bastard and your your heroine despite being snotty doesn't deserve to be treated like a whore for being a little reluctant. I tried warming up to this hoping for a happy(er) ending, instead it left me feeling like I need to go bathe in a harsh abrasive.

I like your wrting style and have to admit you have a certain flair but this plot sucks.

Very good

very good story, also, people should look at the story genres and descriptions before reading it and commenting on how believable it is. not every story is going to be down to earth and completley believable.

LOVE IT

Hey goldeniangel i love all your stories but this (and the sequal storyline) is my fave keep it up!

Hey Angel

As always, your writing is fantastic and your visual imagery beyond compare. Ignore the idiots just as you told me yourself. It would be nice if some of these so called "critics" would leave a name on one of their crude and rude comments because being anonymous is just such an easy thing. Keep up the writing Angel, I look forward to your stories.

i'm still shaking

and my pussy is soaked. Thank you.

Yawn another mamoth cocked Master

God how many stories are people going to write where the main guy is mamoth dicked.

Try reading party of 5 the lead character is never mentioned as being huge or super wide just normal.

Subserviant

Great story Sub woman treated as she should be

Wonder why other comments are like that

I mean, this *is* the nonconsent/reluctance category, right?

:)

It does amaze me how so many people complain about what they read on these sites. Seriously?? You thought you were going to read something G-rated?? What is the name of this site again??? DUH!!!

If you take a moment to stop the complaining and open your mind, you will enjoy it like the rest of us. The writer is not telling of a real life true story here!!

Goldeniangel, take it as a compliment...same as smiling and waving to a driver that flips you off. ;)

Nice

Wow, this is so incredibly well written. Grammar, usage, etc. was all pratically used without error. I am SO GLAD that you mentioned Allison realizing she is succumbing to Todd's manipulative ways when she started unconsciously thanking him when he allowed her some freedom (such as the simple act of closing her shirt when she walked to his apartment). The realism there reminds me of the actual complex that goes on within some rape and kidnap victims. It's sad, really. But it's great that your writing isn't just a bunch of "sexy" sentences strung together- it actually has thought and depth. 

I, just some girl with a miniture version of the Cinderella Complex, keep hoping to find a non-consent/reluctance story that ends up with romance between the characters when the guy starts realizing his love for the girl and stops his manipulative tendencies. Truthfully, I hated when Todd took away her anal virginity. And when he finally started fucking her vagina, I hoped that he would realize what he had done (or have her crying in front of him) and have him feel extremely bad. And then he'll repent on his actions and releave her of the blackmail. And somehow, they'll fall in love, go on a real date, and end happily ever after. Yeah, right. I completely understand that the category in which I found this story does not usually include happy-go-lucky endings like that. Oh well. Maybe not as many people have the same fantasies as I thought. In any case, I want to commend you for your brilliant writing (even if it IS a bit rougher than I hoped).

Everything- the chemistry between the characters, the stuff Todd makes her do- is just so hot. There is no other way to explain it. 

Anyway, I was going to talk about some other things, but I'm getting impatient- I want to read the other chapters already! LOL. Maybe I'll leave a more detailed comment when I finish this series. 

Each story is getting more exciting:)