All Comments on 'Wrestling Match'

by Psishadow

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jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 6 years ago
Ok

It was alright, I have read a few wrestling stories here

Mymantoy999Mymantoy999almost 6 years ago
I would really like to know

what possessed you to think this belonged in the Lesbian category? "Erotic Couplings" or "Fetish" probably, but a man fucking a woman has nothing to do with being a Lesbian.

Not a bad story, but seriously in the wrong category

PsishadowPsishadowalmost 6 years agoAuthor
My mistake

I hit the wrong category when I submitted it. Have put in to have it moved to the proper category

NarkonNarkonover 5 years ago

I could be a little longer and the transition between scenes could be a little smoother. For example, you could spend a paragraph describing the characters, what they wore, what their attitude was before the match. At times it felt too rushed. But it was a decent try and you should keep writing. We need more erotic wrestling stories here.

charlircharlirabout 5 years ago
excellent

But I have to agree in that a little more details as to size, age, hair color and length, measurements, bra cup, etc would have been welcomed.

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