by Psishadow
what possessed you to think this belonged in the Lesbian category? "Erotic Couplings" or "Fetish" probably, but a man fucking a woman has nothing to do with being a Lesbian.
Not a bad story, but seriously in the wrong category
I hit the wrong category when I submitted it. Have put in to have it moved to the proper category
I could be a little longer and the transition between scenes could be a little smoother. For example, you could spend a paragraph describing the characters, what they wore, what their attitude was before the match. At times it felt too rushed. But it was a decent try and you should keep writing. We need more erotic wrestling stories here.
But I have to agree in that a little more details as to size, age, hair color and length, measurements, bra cup, etc would have been welcomed.