All Comments on 'Mrs. Patel Tricked by Fake Doctors Pt. 05'

by Danielle_Sanchez

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Unrealistic

I enjoyed the stories in the beginning, but I think you've "jumped the shark". When two boys would rather piss on two hot women rather than screw them you've lost my interest.

napsterbater663napsterbater663almost 6 years ago
Don't let anyone tell you this story needs realism

It's fantastic just how it is. Maybe you could have dragged out the Preeti-Lakshmi at the school angle a little longer but I can understand how it might have been difficult to do without daddy.

PaulplaysPaulplaysover 5 years ago
Raising the Kink Factor!

This new turn of events has substantially raised the kink factor!

It’s getting hot in here....

tazz4fun69tazz4fun69over 5 years ago
So dirty.

Can't believe you had the daughter suck her father's cock. Then the fake doctors paused on them. Wow. Hope you get Lakshmi's sister in on this. Curious on why you didn't say how big the daughter's tits were. Or is she like an exact copy of her mom in the looks department too?

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Sorry I don't role play. I did write some stories though. Some parts are based on real events in my life, but I did exaggerate some parts too. I hope you like them, but feel free to share any feedback you have.