by Boxlicker101
An incredible story told in an alluing, sexy voice. Two thumbs up... you can tell me where you want the thumbs!
the voice didn't do much for me... Too much like a news anchor or something :-\ Great story though!
The narrator was too stiff. The speaker would have been much more exciting if he would have used various levels and expression.
The reading needed more emotion. I wanted to hear the lust in his voice.
o i just loved your story . made me wish i was her. more of the same type theme please