All Comments on 'It's Just Sex... Ch. 03'

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Turtle1952Turtle1952almost 6 years ago
fantastic

really enjoying the suspense now. Please keep going.

redlion75redlion75almost 6 years ago
3

3 can keep a secret if 1 is dead and 2 are in it to the end

prop69prop69almost 6 years ago
Loved the story except -2 for the pissing

The brother sister was excellent.

Nothing gained with the pissing

goducks1goducks1almost 6 years ago
i liked the story

and gave it 5 stars - but i think its was short on the sage between Mike and Max and a little to much pissing. not sure how you wrap this up in one chapter - particularly given how little you write in each chapter. but i'm an optimist - and i really like this - despite its quick read!!

WargamerWargamerover 2 years ago

Still good. Gets 5/5

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I occasionally write erotic fiction, mostly in categories that interest me. I don't often submit stories, but if/when I do, I do my best to give it my all.

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