All Comments on 'Star Wars - Galaxy of Sex Ch. 01'

Bloody excellent, plot not to neglected, but not to overpowering, and a masterfully done sex scene

The writing is well done and engaging as is the sex scene my issues as a star wars fan arise from the plot. The first being the witches. While they are dark side users they never joined forces with the separatists, in fact in one episode they have to fight off an attack from them. The second being that while their magic could be used for a fuck bomb it’s unlikely they would care about the fate of the galaxy. Three Ashoka blades are actually yellow and green. Now these are just nit picky issues. The biggest one is that the clone wars only lasted 3 years. Ashoka joined her master in the early days at 14 years old. When she left the Jedi order she was only 17. So she would have technically been a child when this would have happened.

I’m just glad I’m not the only nerd too caught up in SW. I was gonna write or t the same plot issues.

Pretty good story overall

Great job. Next anakin needs to fuck her. Maybe Rex aswell