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by Southerngirl7205/18/08

Absolutely Amazing!

With all the horrible writing out on this site, it is very, very refreshing to see true talent shine through. I could practically feel the motion of the train, hear the patter as the rain as it hit the glass...Not to mention feel the sexual buildup. Another great story, Mr. Gatsby!

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