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such beauty
Turtledove that was a truly beautiful poem. Keep up the good work. It was good to read a poem that actually gave me a warm and tingly feeling.
Great!
Loved this , puts you in the mood,
Lloyd
Fun
This was a fun read, getting me rather enticed, but at the same time putting me at ease. I loved the flesh and bone image. That's just fun. Also fun: slick, wet, spent, flesh. :)
But that's another poem entirely. You did a good job expressing how you feel. You seem to have a great talent for that. The idea of you finding your home in the pressence of someone is very nice and comforting. Good job.
Beautiful
Turtledove,
You have captured the sentiment of love beautifully.....loved it.
Gypzie
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