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by Anonymous02/14/05

there are a few,

that I can think of when I read your story, bravo.

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by Anonymous02/16/05

Excellent!!

I believe Zelda has captured the essence of self arousal. Her words, though poetic, exude the perfect amount of "hustler" type bawdiness. Exactly what erotica should be. I could feel her arousal grow stronger with every line.
Good job!!

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